Tell me why

I wrote this little poem and I wish you tell me frankly your opinion about it.

 

 

Tell me why

 

 

  

Through my tears

And lots of fears

I gazed in the sky

Trying not to cry

 

I’ve never loved one except you

I gifted my soul and no one can do

You left me a wizened rose

But I’ll never die of that cause

 

Think and gaze at my eye

My feelings are lost and can’t fly

Without your love darkness attacks my life

But I swear at last I will survive

  

Along the meadow I’m leaving now

Without informing you so don’t ask how

Just to remind you I’m not coming back

Gloominess can’t cover me and so the dark

 

 All my whispered words disperse

When I try to poetize my verse

Tell me why but please don’t lie

You sell my love and let me cry